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Amanda Izzo's avatar

I’m only 1/4 of the way through, had to pause to tell you how deeply I ADORE this, Allen!!!

As a grandchild who grew up listening to stories of WWll (my favorites being what war rations looked like for my grandmother at the time and the turning point of the 40s) you nailed what it looks and feels like in my mind.

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Just read Part 1 so far and I'm completely hooked. Those sentences. "Politeness was often the first disguise of danger."

"Every old German in this part of Argentina had known who he was, even if they pretended not to." Absolutely gripping.

Diving back.

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"“I don’t know what I’m here to do anymore,” he admitted. “At first, I just wanted to know where I came from. But now…”

“Now it’s heavier,” she said." Oh wow. Powerful emotional impact there. I love the way this story unravels.

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Done reading; sorry I couldn't wait to comment. Truly, an outstanding story. Everything - the word choices, emotional impacts, character development, as well as the descriptions of the environment to show the historical components - everything worked for me. Made me think and feel.

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